I am especially struck by the lyricism, the rhythm and repetition and musicality, in the last paragraph.
*a fresh memory of a fresh child*
*My own mother motherless…her mother's memories so clouded*
And the vividness of your daughter curling her tiny tongue, and the strange, spiralic symmetry of death and birth, memory and forgetting. Absolutely gorgeous. Thanks for sharing these pieces.
I am especially struck by the lyricism, the rhythm and repetition and musicality, in the last paragraph.
*a fresh memory of a fresh child*
*My own mother motherless…her mother's memories so clouded*
And the vividness of your daughter curling her tiny tongue, and the strange, spiralic symmetry of death and birth, memory and forgetting. Absolutely gorgeous. Thanks for sharing these pieces.
Thank you so much! I’m really enjoying the prompts in the intensive.